Thursday, March 15, 2007

when I get that idea,
it hits me like a bolt
of lightning, it slaps me,
trying to get my attention.

it bangs against my door.
full force! it cries.
it swears & pounds & stamps,
an idea to its core.

never mind creeping! it
shouts. subtlety is for the
tactful! it declares,
and I can't agree more.

2 comments:

a.Kai said...

Wonderful - how an idea/emotion becomes a tangible thing such as a poem. Clear expression - very nice

Inconsequential said...

sounds familiar
insistant voice in head

write me! write me!

:)